✕ Missing Historical Context [6/10]: ¶2 · The article does not explain why the diplomatic passport and visa were rejected, leaving a key detail unexplained despite its centrality to the incident.

"before being told he would not be allowed into the country after his diplomatic passport and single entry US visa were rejected"

✕ Vague Attribution [7/10]: ¶3 · The claim about 'association with suspected members of terror organisations' is attributed to a generic 'US government official', lacking specificity and accountability.

"A US government official said"

✕ Missing Historical Context [5/10]: ¶5 · The article mentions FIFA's assistance but does not elaborate on its nature or significance, missing an opportunity to show institutional support.

"After being put back on a plane to Turkey, Artan received assistance from Fifa officials in Istanbul before boarding a flight to the Somali capital Mogadishu."

✕ Vague Attribution [8/10]: ¶6 · The key financial commitment from FIFA is attributed to unnamed 'sources', reducing transparency and verifiability.

"Sources told BBC Sport that even though Artan will take no part in the World Cup, Fifa has committed to paying his salary."

✕ Decontextualised Statistics [6/10]: ¶7 · This sentence clarifies payment timing but does not resolve whether the 'full fee' includes match appearances or is a goodwill gesture, leaving financial context incomplete.

"Referees do not know the actual fee they will receive for officiating at the World Cup, which is paid after the tournament is over."